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Okay so... this is just a rough sketch because I'm working on the body.

I dont know what to think about it so gentle suggestion would be nice.

I made the thighs very...thick?
I dont know, all in all I do like how it turned out,

Oh, and sorry about the quality, I had to take it with a camera.

Xiaou (c) Blues-Antenna

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:iconmifflenburg:
I don't really know anything about drawing, so I can't really say anything. xD

I like this a lot, though you could make the arms just a little thicker for proportion. Maybe. I don't know. D:
:iconblues-antenna:
Yeah maybe.
^_^
Thank you

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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
:icon16prayers:
Alright, I'm going to give some light critique if thats ok? Since your asked for a suggestion.

First of all, I LOVE how you did the hair. It looks so nice and wispy. Seriously wish I could draw hair like that, mine always looks clumped together and gross.

In my opionion, I think the thighs look fine, but that neck looks a bit to long.
Not to offend, but I can't tell the gender of the character. Which shouldn't worry you, a lot of anime character get mistaken for the opposite gender.
If it's a girl, I think the torso should probably be a little bit smaller, not as long, and make her more curvy (Unless you intended on her being pretty flat chested)
and if it's a guy, you should probably make the hips smaller and the shoulders a bit more broad (Along with the chest perhaps?)

But all in all, hope I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I always liked how you do the faces/head/hair but I'd love to see more full body pictures from you in the future :]
Oh, and I like the outfit, very creative :]

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The best artists are made from bad artists that never gave up.
:iconyiehtk:
I wants her SHIRT.

Can I have it? Just give her another one. I don't want naked people running rampant on your account. D:
:iconblues-antenna:
X D Awwe...If you can somehow take it, you can have it, and I'll give her a new one.

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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
:iconblues-antenna:
Wow. Thank you dear...

And The character is genderless.
I wasn't aiming for either since it's just a rough sketch.
X 3

And now that I look at it...the neck is a tad long. X D

And the way you draw the hair is fine. X 3 I really like it.

And I will keep your comments in mind.

Thanks again!
You're a big help.

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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
:icon16prayers:
Well if it's genderless then the anatomy looks pretty good to me :] haha

--
The best artists are made from bad artists that never gave up.
:iconblues-antenna:
X D Thanks.
You're so sweet.
And gently honest which is amazing.

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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku

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