Alright, I'm going to give some light critique if thats ok? Since your asked for a suggestion.
First of all, I LOVE how you did the hair. It looks so nice and wispy. Seriously wish I could draw hair like that, mine always looks clumped together and gross.
In my opionion, I think the thighs look fine, but that neck looks a bit to long. Not to offend, but I can't tell the gender of the character. Which shouldn't worry you, a lot of anime character get mistaken for the opposite gender. If it's a girl, I think the torso should probably be a little bit smaller, not as long, and make her more curvy (Unless you intended on her being pretty flat chested) and if it's a guy, you should probably make the hips smaller and the shoulders a bit more broad (Along with the chest perhaps?)
But all in all, hope I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I always liked how you do the faces/head/hair but I'd love to see more full body pictures from you in the future :] Oh, and I like the outfit, very creative :]
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I like this a lot, though you could make the arms just a little thicker for proportion. Maybe. I don't know. D:
^_^
Thank you
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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
First of all, I LOVE how you did the hair. It looks so nice and wispy. Seriously wish I could draw hair like that, mine always looks clumped together and gross.
In my opionion, I think the thighs look fine, but that neck looks a bit to long.
Not to offend, but I can't tell the gender of the character. Which shouldn't worry you, a lot of anime character get mistaken for the opposite gender.
If it's a girl, I think the torso should probably be a little bit smaller, not as long, and make her more curvy (Unless you intended on her being pretty flat chested)
and if it's a guy, you should probably make the hips smaller and the shoulders a bit more broad (Along with the chest perhaps?)
But all in all, hope I didn't hurt your feelings or anything. I always liked how you do the faces/head/hair but I'd love to see more full body pictures from you in the future :]
Oh, and I like the outfit, very creative :]
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Can I have it? Just give her another one. I don't want naked people running rampant on your account. D:
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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
And The character is genderless.
I wasn't aiming for either since it's just a rough sketch.
X 3
And now that I look at it...the neck is a tad long. X D
And the way you draw the hair is fine. X 3 I really like it.
And I will keep your comments in mind.
Thanks again!
You're a big help.
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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
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You're so sweet.
And gently honest which is amazing.
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"taught me to RP gay rape I MEAN WHAT" Napalm-Otaku
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